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What happens to my book proposal? April 8, 2010

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Chip McGregor is one of those guys who seems to do it all—blogging, speaking, writing, finding future best-selling authors, securing over 1,000 book deals . . . blah, blah, blah. It’s enough to make the lesser gods sick, but you can temper your loserville/lessergod pain quickly when you read all of the great advice Chip gives you in his blog.

Chip’s latest post is about the journey your proposal takes once an agent asks for it. Many times your novel/non-fiction opus might not pass through the golden doors of publishing for reasons you’ve never thought of.

Read more here.
                                                                 
And for some other insights on what happens to your blood, sweat and tears:

From proposal to published book.

The parts of the proposal agents focus on.

Thoughts from author/editor Diane Eble.

 

 

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A novel process—getting your novel published February 21, 2010

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A novel is written. So many hours over coffee and chocolate and excuses to not do housework. It’s quite the deal, really. I should write another one. :) But then . . .

First edit
Storyline—Does it make sense? Does it flow?
Characters—Are they believable? Are they likeable?
Length—Is it the required length for the genre?
Plot—Does the suspense/tension build?

Second edit
Drivel—Are there sections of pointless rambling?
Writing—Is every word necessary?
Chapters—Does every chapter end with a hook?

Third edit
Spelling—Is everything spelled correctly?
Punctuation/grammar—Are all my sentences complete, my apostrophes in the right places, and my periods frequent enough?

Fourth edit
Find a few friends who
a) are not close enough to me to care about disappointing me?
b) are kind enough to read the manuscript at all?

Fifth edit
Make almost all the changes my knowledgeable friends suggested without muttering some Hogwarts, um . . . blessing over them.

Query
Come up with a stunning paragraph that forces the agent/editor my manuscript will be sent to to stop popping caffeine pills and gasp in excitement.

Proposal
Make every word about my manuscript dazzle like a disco ball.
                                                                 
Mail
Send in the darn thing.

Wait
And wait
And wait

Get mail
Receive a form rejection letter
or a really nice and encouraging, but still a rejection, message.

And that’s when it’s time to rewrite my novel or start another one.

Personally, I think that’s how Amy Tan came up with the title The Joy Luck Club. It describes the writer’s life to perfection.

P.S. I wanted to insert this photo so badly but couldn’t do it in a hurry. Check out the disco ball lady here!

 

 

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Writers’ market guides—which one should you buy? January 2, 2010

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Writer’s Market, one of the standard submission guides writers use, seems to have taken its 2010 edition down a rocky path. Amazon reviewers are not impressed.

“This edition missed the boat completely.”

“This edition is substandard.”

“This 2010 Writer’s Market is the last edition of this book that I’ll be buying.”

“Somebody needed to proof the manuscript before publication.”

Other online book sellers seem to copy the reviews from Amazon, so I am limited in my resources; nevertheless, my thought is that the researchers and editors for Writer’s Market may have taken to resting on their laurels rather than upgrading (or even maintaining) the quality and content of the 2009 guide.

Needless to say, I won’t be buying this year’s Writer’s Market. My choice would be Jeff Herman’s Guide to Book Publishers, Editors, and Literary Agents 2010.

Amazon reviewers, so far, have given it four and a half out of five stars, and to top that,

“the twentieth edition has been has been completely revised. The updated layout includes new symbols and callouts designed to give readers the information they need most in a quick and accessible format.”

 

 

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Submit to writing contests December 28, 2009

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Stephie Smith’s site is a combination of writers’ resources, photos, novel excerpts, and PC help; but one of her most helpful pages is an ongoing list of writing contests. She has arranged all the information in easy-to-read columns, a visual dessert for writers.


Stephie’s historical romance, “The Masquerade,” has garnered 1st- 4th placements in various contests in 2008, and the awards helped her win an agent’s attention—she is now represented by Helen Breitwieser.

Read more about Stephie.

Stephie’s experiences prove that entering contests is a great way to:
—gain invaluable critique
—improve writing
—get attention from agents/publishers

There are many scams when it comes to contests and entry fees, so here are some tips and warnings when entering writing contests (from Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America).

More writing contests
List from Manuscript Editing
List from Freelance Writing
List from Writers-Editors
List from Tectonic Designs

 

 

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Litmatch—agent search and submission tracking September 28, 2009

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LitMatch is a free service that helps writers find and secure an agent. Apart from the necessary ads in the right-hand column, the site is beautifully designed—crisp and clean looking. It’s dead easy to use, too. [Since writing this post, LitMatch has changed its name to Author Advance]

Tracking
For each novel, record the submissions you’ve made to agents. (You would not believe how easy it is to forget.)
Records: Day, agent, agency
Follow up info
End result

Agent search
Find an agent who represents your genre—LitMatch’s search feature could not be any easier.

Literary agencies and agents
LitMatch lists 1757 agents in 821 agencies. You can pull up any agency and find:
The list of agents
What they prefer to represent
All their contact info
Personal info/publishing experience
If they are currently open to submissions
If they accept e-mail submissions
If they accept postal submissions
A pie chart of the percentage of offers, requests, and rejections
Responses
Response times
Submission guidelines
Clients and projects represented
Comments

Agent blogs
Lists and links to all of the blogs agents have

Hotlist
When you find an agent or agency you like the look of, you can hotlist it, grading it out of five flames.

LitMatch blog
Talks about what LitMatch hopes to offer in the near future

I’ve just registered so I can track who I’ve sent my queries to. Hopefully you guys will find it just as helpful as I have.

 

 

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Make the most of your writing conference September 22, 2009

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I’ve been at the ACFW conference for the last few days. I went without expectations, and was duly impressed with what I saw. Here are a few tips on how to make the most out of yours.

Packing list
Comfortable shoes
Clothes that meet the “relaxed professional” look
Notepad and pen
Laptop, power source
Business cards
Snacks
Water
Extra room in your luggage for all the books you’ll bring home

During the conference
Do advance research on the workshops offered.
Don’t miss a thing.
Get to your agent and editor appointments at least five minutes early.
Be ready to hand out your card to anyone who asks.
Chat to all the other writers—some of them have terrific advice.

Have ready to show editors and agents (only if they ask)
The first five pages of your novel/book (double spaced)
One-page synopsis of your novel/book
Writing samples
Bio page with all published credentials and social media activity

The editors and agents will usually only scan your papers to see if they want to work with you, and even then, most agents won’t ask for the full MS until they have read the first three chapters, which they will ask you to e-mail after the conference.

The best advice I can give you is this: If you have a completed novel you’ve pitched, and an agent or editor asked for more, send in the partial that’s been requested ASAP so that the agent does not forget you among the heap of other writers they showed an interest in.

 

 

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But God Wrote This Book!! May 12, 2009

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A group of freelance editors got together last week to discuss the phenomenon of receiving submissions from authors who were sure their manuscripts came directly from God. Some statements made by writers:

God wrote my book.
I want to put God as the author on my front cover.
I’m just letting the Holy Spirit write it all.
I’m not sure how many words it will end up being. God is writing the book, and when he says it’s done, then it’s done.
God dictated this book to me; it has to be published.
On his title page, “By —–, as revealed by the Holy Spirit.”
I’m rewriting the Bible–God has told me that all the other translations are wrong and heresy, so I’m going to do it the right way.
You shouldn’t charge me for editing because it will be a service to God.
I know my book is going to be a best seller because the Holy Spirit is writing it.
God gave me this message.

The problem with this?
As with any piece of writing, a first draft will always be a first draft. Even if the words are moonbeamed from heaven, the writer will translate them into his or her own level of understanding, culture, and word choice; in other words, they won’t end up sounding exactly like God. Think of it in relation to playing telephone, only with one person in the chain whispering from the other side of a chasm.

Granted, there any many wonderful Christians who can hear the voice of the Holy Spirit and be led by him. Nevertheless, God requires excellence in his temples, and it takes the Ephesians’ “brick upon brick” (see Eph. 2:20-22) method to build something beautiful and complete. We are expected to be good stewards of any gift we have, so fair dues should be given to those writers who listened, wrote, and then dared to take the next step and submit their writing to an editor, agent, or publishing house. Being a good steward, though, also includes making the presentation of that gift as outstanding as possible.

Every master craftsman has gone through years of dedicated work to earn that title. In the same way, a writer is not naturally brilliant the moment he/she starts to write. Most established writers have worked with other writers, taken classes, and written a lot before their work was published. They honed the discipline of writing on a regular basis, of learning from critique, and of figuring out how to write clearly and in an orderly way that makes sense to the reader. Successful writers take their emotions out of the editing process and let the editor do his/her job to make the manuscript worthy of publication.

God can certainly guide an author along the way, using his/her talent and his voice to create something unique and beautiful. Nevertheless, when writers use some of the phrases mentioned in the opening of this article, the statements tend to creep out editors so much that they run the other way rather than sign up for the job.

“There’s an inside joke among editors that God is the worst literary agent ever.”

It happens, quite often, that when writers talk about being instantly successful because God gave them their Magnus Opus, it translates into meaning, “God gave me the words; therefore, I will make millions, and I don’t have to do any other work to make it excellent (because it already is).” With this mind-set and lack of effort on the writer’s part, an editor usually has to do a line-by-line edit because the quality of writing, grammar and punctuation is so bad.

Any agent would be hard pressed to think of a submission that did not need editing, despite the author’s fame to date. There will always be wordiness, misspelled words, and lack of clarity on some pages of a manuscript. Writing has never been a free fall into fame and fortune. Rewrites are the norm.

“If God wrote your book, why didn’t he edit it too?”

The cost of editing
A freelance editor owns her time, and she wants to use it well. She works to pay her bills and provide for her family. She cannot give accurate quotes based on unfinished work on the client’s behalf, nor can she rely on random word counts pulled out of the air.

Editing is a business.

Editors quote estimated charges based on the market prices and their years of experience, so if an editor has given you a quote, don’t ask for a reduced fee.

The Israelites were not a bunch of freeloaders asking for favors based on who they knew (God). They appreciated beauty and experience, and they were willing to pay good money for those things.

Consider this
Yes, God may be closer to you than your cochlea, but don’t assume that this means you have talent. Be humble, get input from practiced writers, and never submit anything to the bigwigs that is not 100% professional in appearance and quality. If an editor says your writing needs a lot of polishing, don’t take that comment as a criticism of your ability to hear God; just understand that you have not yet reached the level of master craftsman. Consider yourself an apprentice, learn from the best, and listen well. It was this approach that resulted in Joseph, Daniel, and David’s promotion in Old Testament times. Perhaps, by imitating the attitude of these tried and true heroes of the faith, your name will become famous, too.

Many thanks to the members of The Christian PEN: Proofreaders and Editors Network for their input on this topic.

 

Writechat on Twitter April 26, 2009

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I was delighted to be part of a writers’ chat room this afternoon—Julie Isaac, of WritingSpiritResources.com, has begun a great way of using Twitter to benefit writers. From 1PM-3PM CST every Sunday, authors, literary agents and publishers join together (OK, so they’re mostly writers :) ) to share information, answer each other’s questions, and encourage/spur one another on.

Sometimes, writers can feel alone, and they even wonder if their writing is any good (especially when their family is not interested in even reading a few lines). Being a part of something bigger than oneself has rewards all of its own—kind critiques, encouragement, a good kick now and then, and, best of all, friendships.

While writechat does not provide, in itself, that kind of community, most of the participants will then follow each Twitterer they parlayed with during the event, thus building Twitter’s writing community in a different way.

If you would like to be a part of the future writechat get togethers, follow WritingSpirit on Twitter. Also, to get the full benefit of Julie’s help, follow her blog: http://WritingSpirit.com, where she offers exclusive creativity/productivity writing tips, tools, and tutorials.

 

Twitter April 19, 2009

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I joined Twitter a while ago, but was too overwhelmed with it all to pay much attention to the learning curve, so I quit and then came back to it after the menstrual cycle was over with. ;)

Once I uploaded tweeterdeck, all was well again in my world; um . . . that’s tweetdeck. See? Still a newbie.

I won’t give a boring synopsis of all the ins and outs of my, so far, brief journey, but I will say this: there is a lot of good information on Twitter that I never would have seen had my eyes not been glued to the monitor for the last 3 days. (Addictive??? No . . . )

I’d like to share all of the links I’ve enjoyed. Some/most of them have nothing to do with writing. :)

The reality of fast food

Newer 3D curb art from Julian Beever

Very entertaining website; I think it’s in Dutch.

A trend in the romance fiction genre: Amish love stories

Nooo! Please don’t give Susan Boyle a makeover

Author JA Konrath–great resource for writers “The Newbies Guide to Publishing”

Totally fascinating. Beautiful graphs. Debunking Third World myths -

And a hilarious writer’s description of agents’ day on Twitter “MEEN & EVAL AGENTZ… CRUSHERZ OV DREEEMS!!”

Enjoy! :D

 

Interview with Pierre Dominique Roustan April 12, 2009

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This week, as promised, I am hosting a guest blogger and novelist: Pierre Dominque Roustan of Writingandreadingtoday–a blog in which Pierre talks about the publishing industry, genre, writing in general, books, even film and also, as an added bonus, plain crazy, random stuff that would make you wonder why it’s actually on the blog in the first place.

 

You call yourself the wretched writer . . . define wretched.
  
Ahh, yes . . . the word “wretched.” It is a superbly emotionally-charged word that defines, in broad terms, a man/woman who faces the world without fear, but yet with a quiet resignation that everything and anything ends with imperfection and impiety; usually, “wretched” is accompanied by the action of “trudging,” which Geoffrey Chaucer in the movie
A Knight’s Tale wonderfully described as the willful, weary walk of a man who has lost everything but still continues to “trudge” along (naked, mind you) without fail and without fear. Hence, I’m a writer who willfully, wearily WRITES (while facing the world without fear and, yet, with a quiet resignation that my writing will always be flawed and yet passionate and powerful; it’s always from my heart and soul), but finds that the publishing industry, in its majesty, will look down upon me with quiet eyes, shaking its giant head, waiting for me to try again and again until I’ve WOWED the industry with something even better than my previous work; hence, the term . . . “Wretched Writer.”


What was it that pushed you into writing, and what is your favorite genre to write in?

I always had this strange desire to want to write, and a large part of it was this need to always tell a story. You could ask any member of my family—when I was young, I was honey-glazed ham, an actor of mammoth proportions. I loved telling a story. As I got older, that desire to tell a story and write turned into the prospect of actually writing WELL. I, as well as a wonderful community college professor, saw in me a possible gift, a gift only God could give, and it was creative writing.

Naturally, ever since I was little, I enjoyed reading fantasy. As my craft evolved, I realized that my own personal passion as far as genre was concerned was urban fantasy, horror and thrillers. It always got my blood boiling.

 Would most writers laugh (totally identify with you) at how much have you made from your writing career so far??

 

  Only after I started laughing halfway through telling them, because it really is quite funny how much (little) I’ve made. However, if they started laughing BEFORE I began laughing, I’d have to kill them all.Who is it that has to put up with your long hours at the computer and what do you do to soothe their loneliness/bitchiness/tears?  On occasion, my wonderful significant other, my angel, my muse, my love, my princess Krysta has to put up with my hours on the computer, pounding away at the keyboard. However, she hardly ever seems lonely/bitchy/sad because I write so damn fast anyway (she motivates me, basically).

 

 


What do they think of your writing?

 

She absolutely adores it. She thinks I should win the Pulitzer. She thinks I’m a genius. No, seriously. She does.

You say that you have been working on your novel, The Cain Letters, for far too long. As writers, many of us can never finish the long projects that we start. What possessed you to finish your novel? What’s the secret?

 

It’s funny that you mention “far too long,” as the amount of time spent on the manuscript isn’t solely based on my efforts. In all honesty, I wrote the whole manuscript in about five months. Within a span of a year following the completion of the manuscript, I had nothing better to do but to tweak it as much as I possibly could, because during that time I was querying it to literary agents and a few smaller publishing houses, looking to see if the manuscript could be a potential prospect. That whole year felt long.

 

Now that Eirelander Publishing has signed me, I’m in the midst of some heavy editing, thanks to the remarkable editor-in-chief (my editor actually (lucky me)), who uses editing like the U.S. marines use heavy weaponry on terrorists. Her words are like bullets; SO, the question isn’t necessarily what possessed me to finish my novel, as in, actually completing the work from start to finish, but to finish the novel , as in, “perfecting” it as much as possible without going insane (which is happening slowly, but what else is new?). The secret is lots and lots and lots of coffee, Doritos, pop, Facebook games and lots of kisses from my pretty lady, Krysta.

What was the magic phrase you used that garnered the attention of 3 agents?

 

Honestly, I’m not entirely sure . . . I can only make a guess in that currently (as literary agent, Nathan Bransford, on his blog, had stated by stats from comments), vampire literature seems to be on the rise.

 

Naturally, my query had the term “vampire hunter” in it and immediately, I imagine, their ears perked up. I also used the term “urban fantasy,” and currently, urban fantasy is extremely hot, especially Young Adult urban fantasy. Thank you, Stephenie Meyer.

Tell us what The Cain Letters is about and, also, fill us in on how you came up with the plot/story line.

 

Wow, you’re killin’ me, Sally . . . that’s like asking me to outline my life from the age of 2 to now. I’ll give it a shot, though!

 

To make it easy, here’s my query. It should pretty much outline for you what it’s about:

 

The dark origin of vampirism has lurked since the beginning of time beneath the clouded eyes of the world, until an ancient book surfaces, uncovering a sinister secret the Bible never revealed—Cain’s hidden lair and his hellish awakening.

 

Genesis 1:15. And the LORD said unto him, Therefore whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold. And the LORD set a mark upon Cain, lest any finding him should kill him. The Bible, however, never reveals Cain’s deal with the devil, which enabled him to become the first, most powerful vampire to walk the earth. As “father of the damned,” Cain would become a target for other vampires wanting to kill him for his power. If they had that book. 

 

The Cain Letters is a 74,000-word urban fantasy thriller featuring Alexandra Glade, a fierce God-fearing vampire hunter, who must do the unthinkable: protect Cain to save humanity. Any human can slay Cain and face the wrath of God sevenfold, but a vampire, a monster that has become the evil of all mankind, will throw the wrath of God onto the world.

 

And there you have it. How I came about the plot and storyline is actually pretty interesting, in that I was still going through that “religious thriller” phase, thanks to Dan Brown. I also read Unholy Grail by D.L. Wilson and saw, without a doubt, that religious thrillers exploded. With all of that came the amazing religious speculations and theology and controversy in Christianity.

 

I, being a born-again Christian myself, was always fascinated with the discussions of faith, philosophy and theology of many principles relating to life and such; however, I was also very, very interested in urban fantasy and horror, particularly things of the supernatural and paranormal. I remember watching a documentary on Vlad the Impaler, the one true historical “Dracula.” I flipped through the pages of Elizabeth Kostova’s The Historian as well and found a fascination with  speculative history;  then I thought of how sexy and cool The Matrix was, and the rest is all history. Without a doubt, The Cain Letters has a high concept: it’s Blade and Underworld meets The Da Vinci Code. The thought of that was like candy to me.

 

I’ve heard that authors are supposed to write a publishable book a year if they want to eat. Aside from the many hours you spend editing your current piece of brilliance, what’s in your head for the next book, or have you decided to change professions and become a Trinity dancer? (They get to wear nice noisy shoes.)

 

The thought of being a Trinity dancer is appealing in that it would keep my body healthy (and those nice noisy shoes wouldn’t hurt either). Plus, I like dancing, too, a lot; but honestly, not as much as writing. First off, I can write a lot longer than I can dance. That’s a given. What’s in my head for the next book is actually very much a valentine for me, in that I currently already have my sequel to The Cain Letters finished–back in September 2008, I believe. There are two other projects that I’m waiting eagerly to develop: one of them is the third installment to The Cain Letters; the other is a separate novel, also urban fantasy.

 

Finally, have you any sage words for those who have written their novel but they have avoided going back to work on it because it’s so horrible in its current state (cough, cough)?

 

Sit down, kiddies, and listen to your daddy. Gather around. First off, let’s make one thing clear. I don’t care how awesome a writer you are. Maybe you’ve won the Pulitzer (and I’m jealous of you in more ways than I can count on both hands). Maybe your writing can wipe me out like Windex cleaner on a window. Here’s the fact, though: from your point of view, your work’s probably going to ALWAYS look horrible; hence, there’s no point in you fretting about whether or not you should go back to work on it. The answer is: you SHOULD go back to work on it. You should ALWAYS work on your work. Working on your work is work, but it’s good work. It works your brain and your heart, and any work that works your brain and heart, while being hard work, is work that’s worth working on.

So don’t give up on your work. Trust me. It works. It’ll make you feel better.

Thank you so much, Pierre, for telling us all about your writing world. So, now that you know a little about The Cain Letters, keep an eye out for its release and then buy yourself a copy. Oh . . . and read it during the daylight hours!

(Please excuse the formatting; it’s a WordPress problem.)

 

 

 

 
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